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In Every Eden (The Heroes We Can Afford)
Poor Hector XD So close yet so far! Maybe he'll learn to cool his jets a little! I look forward to reading the rest!
Commented on: February 17, 2015
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Interesting writing, although it's not really my thing I do have a small piece of advice, if I may. It is a little difficult to read so perhaps utilise white space a little more. Put your speech on a new line, it makes it a little easier to read. Looking forward to seeing what you produce in the future ^.^
Commented on: February 5, 2015