Sparkatale

A lone human can't be 'they'-you have to pick a gender for the person. Large chunks of text is not a good idea, especially in the first chapter. Put space before the introduction of the Facers & a space before the introduction of the Healers. Make the decision of the normal humans another paragraph. The formula will wipe away whose kind? The formula itself is confusing. Please don't use ellipses so often & if you do use them, don't capitalize the first word that comes after the ellipsis. You don't need to capitalize the 'the' in the Scientists or the Facers.