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Created: November 17, 2013 | Updated: January 24, 2014
Genre : Horror
Language : English
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| 1: | Prologue | 208 |
| 2: | Gruesome Alibi | 815 |
| 3: | Beaten and Bruised | 1690 |
| 4: | Trickster | 1111 |
| 5: | Hide n' Seek | 3118 |
| 6: | Purity | 1485 |
| 7: | Torture Vs. Insanity | 2081 |
| 8: | Bad Habit Number 1 | 2070 |
| 9: | From the Water He Came | 1394 |
| 10: | Fire Dancers | 868 |
| 11: | The Grateful Visitor | 1403 |
| 12: | Dead Dogs, Confused Puppy | 625 |
| 13: | Sanity Surfaces | 955 |
| 14: | Right Hand Man | 1696 |
| 15: | Recovering and Keeping Busy | 1613 |
| 16: | Burning Consequences | 1804 |
| 17: | Healing, a Dragon, and a Problem | 2324 |
| 18: | Castle of Nelvera | 972 |
| 19: | The Challenger | 1155 |
| 20: | Take it Easy | 1349 |
| 21: | The Pool of Memories | 1743 |
| 22: | Her | 747 |
| Total Wordcount: | 31226 |
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A very intriguing prologue. Kind of short, but that's not an outright bad thing.
The summary I think would be equally effective--if not more--if you got rid of the quotes. It's just a little awkward the way it's formatted right now. Also, the use of the first pronoun "him" is a little too abstract.
Can't say much because there isn't much to read yet, but I would definitely continue to read this given the chance. You caught my attention, and we haven't reached the first chapter yet! Kudos on that.
November 17, 2013 | Liz uli
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Thanks so much! I have just posted the first chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it, it being so short and all. I understand what you mean about the quotes in the summary, but basically the character was supposed to be talking and to make it less confusing I put the quotes. Does that make sense? Haha! Thanks again!
November 17, 2013 | Owl Writer
