Devil's Moon: Legends of the Lost Tribes 3, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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Devil's Moon: Legends of the Lost Tribes 3

By: Kitty Lewis

Status: In Progress

Summary:

With the Lizard War over and the tribal lands slowly returning to normal, Kandrina and Remlik have begun a new study of the old Explorer's Guild journals. They discover a mystery in the writings of 'C', an explorer from over 200 years ago, whose last journal was lost. Legend has it 'C' was exploring the Forest of the West while writing it, so naturally the two scholars decide to explore westwards in their never-ending quest for knowledge. But will they stumble across something best left undisturbed? First chapter sample, comments and constructive criticisms are always welcome :)

Created: May 11, 2015 | Updated: July 15, 2015

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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2: Chapter 2 5329
Total Wordcount: 8640

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      Now this is my kind of fantasy story! Love the intrigue in the mystery and the buildup of suspense throughout, I can't wait to hear the unraveling of the truth. The forests may be the most mystical places on Earth, so full of natural magic and enchantment, you chose the perfect setting for this mystery. What’s that? You’re going to publish the next chapter? :)

      May 19, 2015 | Ryan Funk