Sparkatale

This was quite interesting. I had a feeling things weren't quite as they seemed, but even so, I didn't find the ending predictable. :) It was an interesting twist on what becomes of someone's mind when they have nothing else to preoccupy it, otherwise--or what they do have is of little to no use, as was the case, here. :P

So I avoided Out in the Clouds as you suggested, but I am going to have to read that now because I'm immensely curious about it. Anyway, this was really intriguing. I wasn't expecting the ending at all and I'm suddenly reevaluating going out with my friends on the weekends instead of staying home. I need to get out more. The whole time I was fully expecting them to turn out to be vampires, so it was a nice little twist there at the end. I liked following Edwin as he slowly convinces himself that not only are his neighbors vampires, but that he himself is becoming one and to stop it he should murder someone. That's a scary thought. This story was very interesting and a fun read and at the end of the day you make a fantastic point; common sense is a very important thing to have. Without it, it's easy to get yourself into trouble.

Man this is so good :)

    When I start reading; what makes him sleep with one eyed open is, stress of the work, am I right?

    Second do he drink a lot of coffee, energy drink, and get addict to a drugs? I tried playing horror games at night but before, I take 3 cup of coffee 4 energy drink while playing and I feel the game... So cool thought, even its dangerous...

Nice work, I looking forward for the others.