The Diary of Secrets, a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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The Diary of Secrets

By: Talia Hale

Status: In Progress

Summary:

Stuck on a remote island surrounded by backstabbers, schemers, and murderers, Karyen has been fighting for the one thing he thought was his purpose in life: fulfilling his father's dying wish. But when he saves a mysterious girl and slowly starts to unravel the answers he's always been searching for, he discovers that things might not be as black and white as they seemed.

Created: March 9, 2015 | Updated: February 3, 2023

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 3

Favorites: 2

Reads: 4952


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1: Prologue 407
2: Chapter 1 1934
3: Chapter 2 1479
4: Chapter 3 1128
5: Chapter 4 1180
6: Chapter 5 1458
7: Chapter 6 1677
8: Chapter 7 2085
9: Chapter 8 2601
10: Chapter 9 1765
11: Chapter 10 2227
12: Chapter 11 1646
13: Chapter 12 1584
14: Chapter 13 1928
Total Wordcount: 23099

Reviews (1)


  • Talia Hale

    I am the author of this story so I admit I'm a little biased, but give it a read and see what you think! I appreciate everyone taking the time to read my story, it's been a passion project of mine since I was 12 years old and I'm so happy I can finally share it with all the wonderful readers on here! Thanks everyone, hope you enjoy :)

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    September 10, 2022 Flag


Comments / Critiques


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    Talia,

    I'm a huge fan of stories with unconventional elements. You'll probably take some heat about the multiple points of view, but I loved it! Anytime you can add a splash or originality to a story it's a net win, especially when the storyline is interesting and your word selection is outstanding.

    Way to go!

    April 12, 2015 | Ryan Funk


  • Chapter: 1 Reply

    Hi hi! So... I favorited this a while back and I've been meaning to comment on it for ages now. It's been a busy year. Anyway, this is a very interesting premise! This is a very short prologue, but it certainly piqued my interest in just a few paragraphs.  I quite like your writing style too. And the fact that you're brave enough to switch to first person in the later chapters is enough to earn my respect. I struggle in that department so I always praise it when I see first person done well. Anyway, I'm going to keep this short and sweet tonight. Just wanted to say I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more!

    September 27, 2022 | Serina Truscott-Duvall


  • Reply

    Hi Serina, thank you so much for the favourite and your kind comments! I really appreciate all the positive feedback and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far. Stay tuned for more chapters coming shortly :)

    All the best,

    Talia 

    September 28, 2022 | Talia Hale