Status: Completed
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Created: February 20, 2015 | Updated: May 10, 2015
Genre : Supernatural
Language : English
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This was brilliantly done, really. The plot was well thought out, and both the spiritual and scientific explanations were well explained. Both sides (secular and spiritual) were imperfect, which was nice, since stories like this generally tend to make either the Christian or secular side perfect. Both had blind spots here, and both had good things, as well.
I think that in some places, the wording was a bit circular and confusing, but for the most part, the writing style was very good and very sophisticated.
Your word choice was impeccable, and the style was neat in that it was a bit on the formal side, very sophisticated. It was fun to read and think about, and I like that you let the reader decide for him or herself what all happened. You didn't force a conclusion on them (which, in my opinion, is why most atheists don't like Christian works and vice versa), but gave several explanations and left it to the reader.
Overall, it was a wonderful piece, and even though it is a highly controversial topic, you handled it incredibly well. The plot was clearly thought out, both sides had flaws and strengths, and you left the reader with something to think about. Great job!
~Raine
February 28, 2015 | Nicole Raine
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Nice story and very descriptive as well. Maybe you could do another spiritual story like this one. Just a thought.
April 10, 2015 | Allyson Andrews