Death Panther, a Horror story | SparkaTale

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Death Panther

By: Shelby Panther

Status: In Progress

Summary:

You're leaning up against a wall, trying to be as quiet as possible. You hear a deep demonic growl coming from around the corner. Deadly claws scraping against the hard tile floors. You begin to move slowly away from the door. The floor creaks under you, everything became silent. You slowly turn your head... only to see a bloodied smiling face looking back at you... I found you...

Created: February 25, 2014 | Updated: February 25, 2014

Genre : Horror

Language : English

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        I must confess, your form of literary writing, unusual as it may be, creates a sense of excitement within me as the girl metamorphosizes from the average mortal and into a demonic beast from some unknown world. Have you ever considered creating a universe for her or the entity sleeps within her (Note: not certain if some unknown mystical entity possesses her or if she herself is said entity). In any case, keep up the good work.

        February 25, 2014 | Zabel Seishimugen


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        I don't know if you already got this or not...

         

        Sorry about not replying for so many days, its just that I am new to
        SparkaTale, and I was using my iPod because my laptop is annoying
        sometimes :P

        I'm still trying to figure things out but I'm learning... I think...
        and I don't know why it turned out like that, like I said, I used my
        iPod.

        And no, nothing is possessing her, also the Death Panther doesn't take
        over, she is completely under control... the thing is, she can't
        change back until blood has been shed... and one person won't do it.
        Only the blood of the people that she hates will allow her to change
        back. And she already killed one...

        March 3, 2014 | Shelby Panther