Status: Completed
Summary:
A man named Opre has a unique view on people getting what they deserve. Even himself.
Created: October 1, 2013 | Updated: October 17, 2013
Genre : General
Language : English
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Good writing, wonderful thoughts, and enough suspense to keep you reading through it. Hall has a great narrative voice that keeps even a heavy story with philosophy light in a very strange way, while creating a dark and heavy ending.
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October 10, 2013 Flag
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I would make that massive paragraph with the incident into two at the point where Opre is starts thinking about Xena.
October 10, 2013 | D.M. Gergen