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A disturbing little tale here. It did have a few grammatical and tense errors that got worse towards the end.
Commented on: December 21, 2013
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Interesting, I am curious to see how the story develops but this is a solid beginning. There are occasional typos, but if the story remains interesting, they are forgivable.
Commented on: December 3, 2013