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Hello Fellow Writers!
So I love to write and love to read what other wrote! Nothing I write will ever be perfect and you may tell me exactly that. Um... I live through my writing and would be incredibly over joyed if you would review my stroy. Or read it, that's good too...
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Rating:This was a really good story. Full of description and suspense. I'll admit at first I found the sentences to bee short and choppy but as I read I realized it didn't bother me. There were no mistakes that I could see. The story itself is very intresting and has a good futer ahead of it. This isn't genrealy a genre that I read but I'm glad I did. It's really good! Keep writing! :)
Reviewed on: November 30, 2013
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This was really good! I didn't find any mistakes or anything that would take away from the story. I found the sentences to be a bit short and made it feel a little choppy but that could just be me. Again, it was good little to no errors in it, very good.
Commented on: November 30, 2013