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This is really good, I've only just finished reading what you posted now but it's a story I got seriously invested in! I know you got editing to do but I really like the characters, I loved 'One-One' and you can see 'Ian' change throughout the book! Please finish this!
Reviewed on: November 14, 2016
Oh wow this looks interesting! A good start to the story. There's no spelling or grammar mistakes or anything! Keep it up!
Commented on: November 14, 2016
Oh wow. You actually see somebody insulting Ian in a cafe? That's rough. This chapter was tough, especially with them losing one of their friends. It was really well-written, though. I like your writing style!
Commented on: October 30, 2016
This was pretty good!
Yeah, I agree with the other person who commented, maybe take away some of the "...", but the actual story is great!
Commented on: October 4, 2016
Wow...this is actually quite good! Especially the poem in the beginning!
Commented on: September 19, 2016
I like the chapter, but what's happening in the beginning?
Commented on: September 18, 2016