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  • Shadowlurk

    Maybe? I think it's happened when I updated my chapter.

    Commented on: February 18, 2016

  • Shadowlurk

    I revised chapter 1 a bit and I see nothing else wrong in the beginning and I can't tell if I'm using word choice, so that's my weaknesses.

    I won't continue this story until someone likes it

    Commented on: February 17, 2016

  • Shadowlurk

    Sorry for that, but thank you very much for pointing it out. I was using my own voice in my head and even I speak it aloud, it still sounds right to me. Maybe I should make it sound more mysteriously, but anyway this story needs to be evaluated again because I typed it in google docs.

    The Half-face has something to do that Henry was born with, but in the story, I didn't explain it that much, but I focused more on his school. I'll probaby write Henry's origin in a short story.

    Henry was born as a half-sider, but some sort of genetic mutation between a hybrid shadow father and a cursed human mother. I got the idea from the budgie genetic mutation. I'm not talking about he's on two side.

    Commented on: February 17, 2016