Denis Trebushnikov | SparkaTale


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I was born and live in small russian town called Velikiye Luki, Pskov Region. I entered Moscow Goverment Technological University "Stankin" then Moscow Literature Institute named after Maxim Gorkiy, and both failed))) Now I'm going to Medical School in my native town. I'm an eternal student, you see. And oneday russian satirist author in 1st half of 20th century sayd that no one writer has become a doctor (but many doctors became writers: Doyle, Bulgakov, Chekhov, Nabokov, Mikle Crichton, Dostoyevsky and etc.), I write since 1994, however I rarely traslate my prose in English.
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  • Stranger of the Mercy-Dale (old ver.)

    Thnx, I work on wide descriptions, I rewrite this txt but I must write in russian at first but I'll have in mind your advises. I don't know why this txt shows as "in progress" I put a mark... it's so strange.

    Commented on: August 28, 2013

  • The Taken

    I like it but I found some terrible things or I see it that 'cause i think in Russian I think on my native language standarts... In the 1st chapter you use many "my" to items when you may write the article "the" instead of. I think it will be read more pro'. Another thing is a rainbow of colors, it's not necessary to write all colors, Rye seeing, it will better if you point to that colors which "hurt" Rye such as whites wall do her feel the nausea. I got it in mind, but I don't need to see pink dress Nanni, Some especialities of her voice was enough for me to imagine her as 3D-character. Next thing I dislike is a slow-going story. There are many thought and reactions but a little actions in first chapter more than others. Lit.agent Evan Marshall advise write reaction scenes after action scenes. And as I think this is special school for "gifted" children like in estate prison in "Alphas" series or another series with a same thing about "gifted" children. It's not bad but it's secondary; and you must try much better to avoid stamps. Good luck and go on.

    Commented on: August 26, 2013