- Joined 02/14/15
- Last login 05/30/15
- Followers 1
- Books Authored 1
- Poems Authored 0
- Reviews 0
- Comments 5
- Discussions Started 0
- Discussion Comments 0
Hello ! My names Marceline and I'm an aspiring author, as I guess everyone here is. I'd love it if you could review my works, because without input, I can't give you better output.
Thanks again for taking the time to read the story - I'm so glad you've enjoyed it and hope you continue to
Commented on: April 2, 2015
I'm glad you've enjoyed what has been written so far, and hope that you will continue too - thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Commented on: March 29, 2015
thanks for the feedback ! I admit, the opening is a little slow, but I hope you find the pace a little better as the story continues :)
Commented on: March 9, 2015
This is really brilliant ! The whole story is pretty chilling, but as a whole, the conclusion etc ends the whole thing very nicely. I was hooked - well done !
Commented on: March 8, 2015
Wow ! This was really engaging and gripping as an opening. Can't wait for the next chapter, to see what happens next !
Commented on: February 15, 2015