T.J Brink | SparkaTale

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  • Joined 08/19/13
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I want to become an author one day and have my books published in the many languages I can only hope to learn. So please, be my friend and help me by critiquing and commenting on my stories.
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The Taken
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  • Gray of Twilight

    I really like this- it has a lot of potential. I was a little bit confused, you have given the reader a heap of information, but there is no substantial place to store it for later use- kinda like when you write something up on your computer and forget to save it, causing the computer to lose it. I would have liked to see Twilight Falls at the start, so I have an idea of where she has grown up and what I should be seeing. Other wise I love it!! Keep going, please!!!!

    Commented on: August 29, 2013

  • The Taken

    Thank you so much for reviewing all of my chapters! I will certainly keep your comments in mind when I get around to re-writing it. Thank you!!

    Commented on: August 25, 2013

  • Life of Death

    This story is really engaging. It seemed real to me, and it was vague, so I'm hoping you will elaborate as the chapters progress onward. The description were really good- especially that of the Reaper, I can see it perfectly in my mind. One problem though, I'm not sure if it's a glitch or not, but after the lines; [“Is that an OK?” “Yes.”] it goes back to the lines [We headed back to the shrine after Colonel Wood ordered the other travellers to “be on the lookout.” For the next little while we walked in silence. I instinctively looked for my landmarks, remembering what my brothers had told me.] and repeats the story from there. Otherwise, it is great and has potential, keep going.

    Commented on: August 24, 2013

  • Xanthos and the Soul Demon

    This was good, I like the plot and the ideas are great. I got a bit confused in some places, but I worked it out eventually. I like this story- good job

    Commented on: August 24, 2013