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This is the thing where I write things so other people can do the thing where they do the thing with the thing, right?
*chapters are one place out-of-order because the site counts the prologue as chapter 1.
Then and Again chapter 11
The Phoenix Queen chapter 15
Lavender chapter 6
That is called semantic satation, and it happens when the same word is used more than once in a sentence. I was taught to avoid it as best I can, but sometimes my brain farts. >.<
Commented on: January 6, 2015
Time for me to turn off my processor's grammar machine. xD
I do understand how the conversations can sometimes be confusing, though. I'll work on that the best I can, since conversations that segue like that are a huge part of how I write.
Commented on: December 10, 2014
[Thanks for spotting those errors. The second one is intentional, and uses an archaic form of speaking to prevent double negatives, but the first one wasn't. Will edit immediately!]
Commented on: December 9, 2014
Your assumption on that is correct. The novel takes place twenty years before the events of the prologue. I'm very glad you're enjoying it and that this book is getting some exposure now; especially since (out of the works I have up here) it's the most difficult to write.
Commented on: November 30, 2014