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  • Joined 10/30/14
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To Xavier
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The Kin

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Fallen Sparrow

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The Sentenced One
Reviews
  • Skies of Avalon

    Rating:
    This is great! You're obviously sitll in the process of editing, as there are a few hiccups throughout the chapters I have read, but as a whole, the plot lines are enough to entice me to continue reading. Good job, Xavier!

    Reviewed on: November 18, 2014

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  • To Xavier

    You have bled me dry, Xavier. 

    I wish you a life full of pain and suffering.

    Farewell. 

    Commented on: November 18, 2014

  • To Richard

    A monster?

    Everyday as you lay your head at night, you will think of me. 

    You will reminisce the days I loved you.

    The nights I gave you my heart. 

    But it is your heart I am after now, Xavier. 

    The monster you so claim to have become will be laying there, waiting for you to come home. 

    And when you think I have come back to you, when you think I have come to love you once again, I will kill you.

    This way, Xavier, I will be the last you ever love.  

    -- The End, Richard

     

    Commented on: November 18, 2014

  • To Xavier

    I do not fear you. 

    I've learned to defend myself, Xavier. 

    All those nights you were out, sleeping around the town with those goddamn cows, I have taken karate. 

    I've learned how to split woods, and cut boards with my hands, Xavier. 

    Come at me with your knife, I'll be ready. 

    I loved you not long ago, Xavier.

    But you have pushed me to great lengths. 

    YOU will rue the day. 

    --Gone, Richard

    Commented on: November 18, 2014

  • To Richard

    Were you not there the nights I cried myself to sleep?

    Can you not forgive me for the sins I have committed? It was a mere comment on your exterior, which in no way reflects your tender heart. Do you truly think I cannot handle you? Do you truly think I do not know you?

    Xavier, you were my everything. 

    I believe in you, Xavier. 

    trust you. 

    -- I'm drifting away, Richard. 

    Commented on: November 18, 2014

  • To Xavier

    What exactly have I tarnished, Xavier? What is this honour you speak of? 

    Where was this honour as you carelessly struck your hand upon my face, Xavier?

    All I did was love, but that wasn't enough. 

    Nothing was ever enough. 

    I'm sorry I hurt you. 

    I'm sorry.

    --Richard

    Commented on: November 18, 2014

  • To Richard

    For the love of all things good, Xavier. 

    Do you honestly think you'll be able to hurt me? You loved me once, as I you. 

    Move on. 

    Find someone, Xavier. 

    Xavier, I want what's best for you.

    -- Richard 

    Commented on: November 18, 2014