Sparkatale

I love long comments like that. ^~^ And I agree with the Hello. I used to love the song. I wasn't trying to do symbolism, but I really like that idea. I don't know if Spark updated my chapters but when I paste from keyboard it doesn't stay italicised or bolded xD I'll fix this.~ Sorry for the confusion. Feel free to read the more updated (well they're all updated by now) chapters on Booksie. ^3^ Oh and I wrote an exotic play around chapter that I did not include in here. cx I like your idea. o3o

That's actually not a bad idea lel. xD No but really, I wanted the story to seem a little realistic. If you're waiting for something/someone the natural thing humans do nowadays is go on their device. I get your point though, I just didn't want to make it boring and write stuff like "so I wait there, sitting in the room while the woman types on her computer. The silence is awkward." I want to be one of those weird, not-normal (abnormal. See? I don't like being normal. I didn't want to write the word.) authors. I like having a different way of doing things. ^~^ I get your point though.~ Thank yew ^w^