Sparkatale

I didn't realize this was completed when I reviewed - Oops. However, I still really like the story. Your grammar was a little off in some places, and there was a bit of repetition, but it's a very alluring idea that's sure to attract more readers, and is well deserved of it.

This was a very intriguing start. Your description is well done, and your character is interesting, and mysterious. I can't wait to see where this is headed, fore I have no idea about what will be coming next. The idea of death, not only as a person, but having a child is one that seems very original, and I really like it. I am very excited to see which direction you take this story in.