Kathryn Carmicahel | SparkaTale

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  • Joined 05/22/14
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Kathryn Carmicahel's Bio

I love to write but I am no always the greatest at it. Over the years I know I have gotten better but I still need help making sure I am doing okay! The more help I can get the better the writer I know I can become. So the more criticism I can get the better. So leave comments on my stories please or send me a message so I know how I am doing.

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Sin of Love

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Just a Secret

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Midnight Secrets
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Light

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Breath
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  • Midnight Secrets

    I'll try not to give up on it but I don't know. And I think some stuff I might be cleared up later. But I'm not sure. I think I started this last year. And I haven't read it since then, so I'm sure it needs some real work!

    Commented on: November 17, 2014

  • Midnight Secrets

    Thank you for reading my story and from what you said it sounds like i really need o re think this story completely. IF this chapter doesn't make any sense, then the next nine surely are not going to make any sense then. I might as well not bother writing this one because it would be to much of a hassle to try to completely redo the whole story have going. Thank you for your input though! I'm also busy with college so, that is the main reason, I probably won't redo this one. Thanks again!!!!

    Commented on: November 17, 2014

  • Midnight Secrets

    That ia fine! This one probably needs more work advise anyways!!

    Commented on: November 17, 2014

  • Just a Secret

    Thank you for your input!! I noticed the dialog as I was reading it to my friend and I am not sure about have to fix it quit yet. I need to do some research on that. As towards showing my emotion I will try to do better at describing things! As to some of the wordy stufF, i will reread it and see what I can do to change it!! THANK YOU FOR YOUR ADVISE!!!

    Commented on: November 17, 2014

  • Blood Trail

    I love it! A wonderful beginning! I am defiantly reading the rest of the chapters you have. It is a very intriguing story! 

    Commented on: November 16, 2014

  • The Enchantress and the Rayvene

    I think it is a very well beginning to a great story! defiantly keep writing!

    Commented on: November 16, 2014