Sherry Whiteside | SparkaTale


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Hey guys! I'm not a writer, but I'm joining this site as strictly a reviewer. I'm willing to read and comment on anything and everything, so hit me up if you want me to read what you've got. Please note that I don't sugarcoat. I'm pretty straightforward with my opinions, however I'm not going to be rude and just say you suck. I'm far more constructive with my critiques. Thanks!

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  • The Girl and the Warehouse

    Nice beginning here. Both of these girls seem like interesting characters with deep backstories that I think readers will enjoy discovering, especially Ariana. The only negative I found was the length of the first chapter. It was very long and given the attention spans of many folks today, that can turn some away. However, it did a great job of introducing these girls.

    Reviewed on: March 12, 2014

  • Carriers

    Very good start. I love your writing style and the characters are great. I'll admit that there are perhaps a few too many of them to begin with, but I suspect that, giving the nature of this story, some of them won't be around for long.

    Reviewed on: March 12, 2014

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