Sparkatale

You know I found this story originally before my phone's browser would let me log into the site. I took me forever to find it again. It took forever for me to find it again and I love it just as much as I did when I first read it. I really love the character developement you have going on. Keep up the amazing work hun!

I appreciate the criticism and will keep it in mind in the future. However, you assume I typed this in the site and on a P.C./Laptop. It was typed up on my phone in an office app and was copy pasted to the site. So it DID have PARAGRAPHING when it was originally written. I also went through it and hit the arrow key to make sure it was still in paragraph form, but I guess the site didn't register it. I'm also lucky if I can get the site to work without freezing and crashing. It's exceedingly frustrating espscially when trying to do it on a 3.4 in. screen. So keep that in mind the next time you critique someone's work.