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Together We Are

By: Allyson Andrews

Created: August 17, 2015 | Updated: August 17, 2015

Genre : General

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

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  • D.M. Gergen

    Eleanor Damaschke created a potentially steamy situation that could have been a wonderful short romance. Unfortunately it stops short, the story ending just at the point where the reader is starting to feel the momentum of the writing. Another chapter (or two if following the author's style) would have helped. Perhaps more detail on the date and the goodbye to give the readers the ability to imagine what happens next. But as is, this falls a little short of its potential.

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    October 8, 2013 Flag


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