Twilight, a Suspense poem | SparkaTale

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Twilight

By: Heather Brown

Created: April 18, 2014 | Updated: April 18, 2014

Genre : Suspense

Language : English

Reviews: 7 | Rating:

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And the heavens grow dark slowly at
The coming of clouds from the depths of hell
Sending waves of terror that
These two have come to know all too well.

From the ground below, the demons emerge
Undead creatures with sights set on death
Upon the denizens of the world they converge
Aiming to wrestle away the living's breath.

The air has gone heavy and silently still
For a moment time seems to be frozen
And then in an instant falls the first kill
Death by a pair refusing to be broken.

She bears in her hand a blade of purple flame
Her very own life force pulses in the blaze
She'll fight to her death but not for her fame
She stands tall in the midst of a blood haze.

In her chest beats a heart that's twisted
In her eyes flickers a flame of pain and rage
Her soul resides with a mind that's conflicted
She was a wounded animal left to die in a cage.

But then she learned the existence of caring
She learned that someone could be trusted
Life became manageable with someone sharing
The burden that she had been entrusted.

And while he's never been one of bravery
He will stand tall at her side through it all
Because he has fallen into love's slavery
He knows that either they'll both live or fall.

And so together they stand up to face the dead
That have risen up from their graves
They'll force these demons back to eternal bed
Or else the world will never be saved.

She stands up and smiles pleasantly his way
He smiles back nervously and thinks of the fight
As together they go forward into the fray
That starts to rage in the blood-red twilight.

Reviews (7)


  • Just BI-You

    Well in terms of writing skills you are much more proficient with your words than I could ever be; and for you to have written so many chapters while being consistent with your own content is amazing. The perspective and plot of a reverse pandemic scenario like this - the protoganist being carriers of a deadly virus - is new to me, and the way it is shaped and ended was well done and smooth. Overall, I hope to read more of your other works soon.

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    June 10, 2014 Flag


  • Leia Elkins

    I love this story! It's insightful and very true to something that might actually happen. Just one question: Why would the CDC let high school kids who could ruin research and all that, including the Blue Plague, into their laboratories??

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    April 4, 2014 Flag


  • Marguerite Grimmett

    Really awesome book! I love all the characters and the different personalities they have, and how they're coping with everything. Hope you post Internationals soon!

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    March 15, 2014 Flag


  • Navara-Desen Ikakkunatsa

    To see more of my thoughts on the story you can read my book review (probably should have put it here instead but you know I thought of at a later time) The reason why I didn't give it five stars is because while it is a great concept, a great plot and such, some of the wordings you use and the hard time I had at first in understanding the characters threw me off a little bit. I wouldn't however say that someone should not read it because of that. If someone has the time I suggest they read this story because it is an amazing one. Great job! ~Nava-Desen ps I'm also that type of person who almost never gives out 5 stars

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    March 13, 2014 Flag


  • Sherry Whiteside

    Very good start. I love your writing style and the characters are great. I'll admit that there are perhaps a few too many of them to begin with, but I suspect that, giving the nature of this story, some of them won't be around for long.

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    March 12, 2014 Flag


  • Dave Robertson

    I liked the story, and the characters were solid. There was a good plot and plenty of action.

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    January 7, 2014 Flag


  • Heather O'toole /Davies

    This story is well thought out and the characters are fun.

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    December 7, 2013 Flag


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