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Comment/critique my first chapter?

Have just posted the first chapter of my story. It's called The EtherRealm and I would be really grateful for any tips or ideas. It's in the Fantasy genre. Please?

by DayDreamer Extraordinaire | Sep 6th 2013, 12:41


  • I commented on your books page. I hope it was helpful. Great start so far by the way.

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    Elizia Brittian | September 14, 2013


  • Sure! Could you please take a look at one of my novels in progress? Thanks!

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    Lissy Popolow | September 19, 2013


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