Sparkatale

Hiya, I'm looking for comments, and reviews if people feel motivated. I have a drabble collection of 35 one-hundred word pieces. I don't expect people to read all 35, but I would really like comments on several, especially my last few. Is it too choppy? What's effective/not effective? etc. In return, I would be happy to read and comment on anything, preferably works that are not too long. I love to critique writing, so please let me know if you want some honest comments in exchange.