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Back and Looking to Critique

After vanishing for a while, I'm back and intend to be active in the community. So I want to critique a few stories. Review trades are always more than welcome. Comment below.

by A . Nonymous | Sep 14th 2014, 20:38


  • I'd be happy to continue our trade, if you like :) Do you remember what chapter I was up to though? If not, I'll figure it out :)

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    Genevieve Middleton | September 15, 2014


  • Um, I think 24 or 25, perhaps?

    And I forgot where I was in Gifted too. Sorry for the late response, as well.

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    A . Nonymous | September 28, 2014


  • Okay! I'll try and get back to it tomorrow :) I think you were up to chapter twelve or thirteen... I've done a bit of rewriting, but I think it was somewhere near there.

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    Genevieve Middleton | September 29, 2014


  • So... have you ever played the Legend of Zelda?

    If so, would you be interested in checking out my (extremely brief) tale portraying Link in a slightly different [but still totally bad ass] way than most people think of him? I think he's awesome but no one on FanFiction has reviewed it at all and i really want to know what people think so i decided to post it here too.

    It wont take more than five minutes of your time to read, so it would be really cool if you could give an opinion and a critique of this version of the green-clad hero.

    Thanks!

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    Jack Thornton | November 21, 2014


  • And if you've never played Zelda, i don't recommend that story^^ to you, however it is still a fun read. Instead, i would suggest you try out Jeremiah: War of the Black Horse Masters. That tale is an epic adventure, and i have just published the first chapter. I really want to know what people think about it.

    As a side note, the world and civilizations which reside in the land of Arlen were made up by my brother and I when we were youngsters, and i just recently decided to write a story in that world for old time's sake. But i also think it's turning out great, so check it out!

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    Jack Thornton | November 21, 2014


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