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Reviews or Critiques, I will return the favor. :)

I only have one story up at the moment, I plan to add another later. But, I would love some reviews and comments to let me know what I need to improve. I will return the favor. I tend to focus on grammar and characters. Meaning, character consistency, development, and depth. If there is anything in particular, other than those you want me to look at. Let me know. :)

by Samantha Ross | Dec 10th 2013, 17:48


  • I'm going to check your story out.

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    Heather O'toole /Davies | December 10, 2013


  • Thanks for checking it out. I tried to change the summary and title. Not that they are really that much better. I really suck at summaries. Will check yours out now.

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    Samantha Ross | December 10, 2013


  • I'd be happy to read your story, and you can read mine.

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    Dave Robertson | December 14, 2013


  • I have a series of 100-word pieces that I'm uploading to this site: if you could check out a couple or all of them, I would be eternally grateful for some comments. They're under "Every Hundred Words: A Drabble Collection." I'll make sure to read your story some time within the next couple days and leave comments/review.

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    Kobayashi Kyoko | February 3, 2014


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