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Quick look over, perhaps?

I'm not really looking for much. I just want somebody to look over my work quickly and tell me what could be better from a first glance. Just something that sticks out like a sore thumb. I'll do my best to return the favor

by Sam Younon | Nov 14th 2013, 19:47


  • I'd be happy to look over your work.

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    Diana Davidson | November 16, 2013


  • I' ll look at it. You may get more to check out your work if you give more info like the genre.

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    Heather O'toole /Davies | November 17, 2013


  • Okay, I will try to label them in the future. Thank you

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    Sam Younon | November 18, 2013


  • I'd be happy to look over it for you, is there a certain piece you'd like or does it matter?

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    A . Nonymous | November 18, 2013


  • No, I don't really care. I just want some constructive criticism

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    Sam Younon | November 22, 2013


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