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Beat up my Story Please! (AKA Review)

Like everyone else here... lookin' for people to look in on my story "Up a Tree." Can't really force you but please at least click on it and read a sentence or two!?! If you read the first few sentences and think "this is so stupid and not worth my time," please say so! Leave a quick word or two. Looking especially for comments on character development please. The plot, I admit, will be not far from cliche due to its satirical nature... but will take any criticism and suggestions. (I'm sure I have quite a few formatting issues). Thank you!

by Liz uli | Oct 27th 2013, 08:56


  • Will try and return the favor and comment on anyone's story as well!

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    Liz uli | October 27, 2013


  • I read your description and I must say I love the concept. Wanna trade reviews/comments with me?

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    Ayumi Kokoriku | November 10, 2013


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