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Alright! Would anyone want to review/comment on my story Marked Book 1: A Darker Power? It only has two chapters so far but I am going to upload more soon. :)
I have another short story called Drowning that I wouldn't mind feedback on too if anybody is interested. 
 

Gracie Rose | January 27, 2015

I'd like someone to review/comment on Epic for me. I'm only planning on uploading the first bit of it (since I'd like to actually publish it one day) but I want some feedback on the beginning since I'm aware that's probably my weakest part.

Huntress of the Sea | March 14, 2015

I would be happy to do so, if you would like to review one of my stories? Either 'Eamersdr-Dreamers' or 'Eamersdr-Ursurper' (it's a prequel to the former but a completely separate story in a different time) I received quite a lot of feedback and I would like to see your views on them!

Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) | March 25, 2015

Sorry, I wrote this on the other thread before I noticed this one (there goes to not reading).  I'll just repeat it here.

"If anyone would like, if you read and write a comment/review on any of my stories I'll return the favor."

Thanks so much in advance.

Hannah Sullivant | March 24, 2015

I would be happy for leave a comment on a novel, if you would like to comment on a collaborative effort between myself and Emi Valladarez (I hope she's alright with me posting this!) I wrote the first chapter, while she wrote the second. It's set in a world of different sections separated by elemental barriers. Each chapter represents a different section. http://www.sparkatale.com/books/details/3142#.VRME3UbFLqA

Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) | March 25, 2015

Done! I left a comment on the first chapter, and I intend to read the second soon.

Very nice story, I enjoyed it.  :)

Hannah Sullivant | March 25, 2015

Greetings, everyone! I am in need for my story- Pastro:Risen, to be reviewed or commented on. It would mean the world to me if anyone could take their time to do so. In return, I would love to review or comment on anyone's story in reply. Have a swift day! :DD 

Oko San | March 27, 2015

I added a comment to your story, with some suggestions. (But I like your story and feel it holds potiental! ) If you want to read a project I'm involved in, I'm working on a novel with Emi Valladarez (Do yourself a favor and follow her - She majors in fantasy works herself and you could learn a lot from her!) entitled 'Finding Eden' ( http://sparkatale.com/books/details/3142#.VRWoTEbFLqA ) We would very much appreciate your feedback!

Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) | March 27, 2015

Thanks! :D

Oko San | April 7, 2015

I left a comment on your story.  I hope it was helpful!  I really did like your story.   I'm interested in seeing the next chapter. :)

I'd appreciate it if you'd help me with mine by leaving a comment as well.  Thanks!

P.S.  I love your name. Hatoful Boyfriend reference, haha. :D

Hannah Sullivant | March 27, 2015

Hi everyone, me again. 

So I've changed Marked Book 1: A Darker Power to Marked: The Beginning Of The Fall, A Darker Power is now book two not one after much figuring out etc.

So if anyone wants to read the new and improved version and give me some feedback I would be really grateful, of course, I will return the favor if you so wish.

Dante out

Gracie Rose | April 12, 2015

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Good afternoon!

 I have written the prolog for a new fantasy/murder novel that I have planned: The Wolf In The Woods. If anyone would like to review or give their comments on that particular short piece I would of course return the favor with a reiview on one of your novels.

 http://sparkatale.com/Books/details/3254

 Thank you!

Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) | April 13, 2015

Hello! Fairly new here, but I'm not exactly looking for reviews here so much as someone to help me expand my novel. A beta reader, a workshopper, whatever you'd prefer to call yourself! I am submitting the ms in October. It's currently at 70,000 words, but my goal is around 100k, so I need at least another 30,000 words. So, my focus isn't so much on grammar and spelling (I had an editor run through that stuff for me a few times already except for some of the newer stuff I've added.) but I'm looking for someone who will be able to help me expand. Someone who can ask questions to potential plot holes and what not. Someone that can show me which scenes should be expanded on, and maybe some ideas you have, and anything really along those lines. If anyone is interested, feel free to send me a message here.

Obviously the story is a fantasy. No Vampires here! It's about a witch who was created for evil. It has a medieval theme to it with a fantasy world/setting. A typical fantasy adventure with a little bit of everything, I think. No smut, but it is written for a more mature audience - violence (beheaddings, graphic scenes, etc.) and swears included. Any other questions, feel free to ask! Thanks so much!

MissKatrina Lynne | August 10, 2015

Hello. I have been working on my novel "Gvera Cross " since 2010, but only recently started to post it online, but i have a hard time figuring out if people like it or not ,since no ever reviews, I don't know if i should keep posting it. Comments and reviews would help a ton.

Blackheart Ravensoul | June 27, 2016

hellomynameisLeoandIhaveastoryIwouldliketohavesomecommentsandreviewson.It'sastoryI'vebeenworkingonforsometimeandwishIhadawayto improveit.It'scalledThePriestess:LifeandDeath.Pleaseandthankyou.

Leo J. | June 27, 2016