Sparkatale

I'll start us off here. If anyone would read and comment/review a chapter of any of my stories, I would be forever indebted to you. Just say which book or chapter you'd like me to comment on. I'll check it out!

Nicole Raine | November 16, 2014

Hi, would you read chapter one of my story just a secret plz. I will go read one of your s as well

Kathryn Carmicahel | November 16, 2014

If either one of you would like to review my story Blood Trail I will gladly return a review!

The Tigress | November 16, 2014

Tigress, I will read yours as soon as I get the time; most likely, that will be tomorrow night. It seemed interesting, and I look forward to reading

Nicole Raine | November 16, 2014

Read and reviewed! I took notes as I went, so if the comment is ridiculously long, just don't freak out...it's not as much as it seems!

Thanks for the review on my story, and I hope I could help your own along!

Nicole Raine | November 16, 2014

This was in response to K.D...

Nicole Raine | November 16, 2014

Thanks! I'll get to you guys some time today hopefully!

The Tigress | November 17, 2014

Read! Very nicely done, Tigress!

Nicole Raine | November 17, 2014

Aw thank you. Likewise, I loved your story as well. ^^ You are both great writers!

The Tigress | November 17, 2014

Would any of you like to read and review my story Mini Adventures of Molly's Toy Collection? I need to know about the character development, because I'm currently working on the main book and it would be nice to see how the characters have rounded out so far.

Mindy Brown | November 18, 2014

I'll read that as soon as possible, Mindy!

Nicole Raine | November 18, 2014

I'll read it as well! You can review my story Blood Trail. ^^ I'll try to get to your story by tonight.

The Tigress | November 19, 2014

Tigress, I read Chapter One for Blood Trail and you did well with it. The details were good, you already had a nice layout for Lilith's character development and her broken relationship with her father. In all, I thought you did a nice job. Well done.

Mindy Brown | November 20, 2014

Thank you! I am putting a lot of emphasis on her emotions for the first part of the story before it shifts to action and tragedy. I have some free time now, and I'll get started on reading yours. :)

The Tigress | November 20, 2014

I have read the first chapter: very cute story! It was refreshing to read, and your writing flowed very nicely. Great job!

Nicole Raine | November 19, 2014

Thanks. How did you like the character development?

Mindy Brown | November 20, 2014

It was super cute, though I think I've said that at least three times already. I could tell pretty quickly how the characters reacted and related to each other, and their personalities, even in that short little blurb. I might be able to read it again this week and give a bit more critisism...

Nicole Raine | November 20, 2014

Okay.

Mindy Brown | November 21, 2014

Thank you!

Nicole Raine | November 18, 2014

Hey, if this club is still going I would really love a comment or review on my in progress story Shout Of Rebellion. I'm happy to read/comment/review one in return. 

Gracie Rose | January 18, 2016

I would love it if any of you lovely ladies would take the time to read one of my stories *-*

Of course the favor will be returned! 

Natalie S. Batey | November 22, 2014

Read! Great job, Natalie!

Nicole Raine | November 23, 2014

Thanks, Nicole! Much appreciated! Do you have a specific story you'd like me to read? 

Natalie S. Batey | November 23, 2014

Not really, just read whichever pricks your interest. :) No problem!

Nicole Raine | November 25, 2014

I'll read your story. :) You can read Blood Trail for me please.

The Tigress | November 23, 2014

Of course! I'll get on it. Thanks for taking time to read mine, Tigress.

Natalie S. Batey | November 23, 2014

No problem! :) And likewise, thanks to you as well.

The Tigress | November 23, 2014

Would anyone like to read my new story Insecurities? I know I just started, but I would like to know how I am doing.

Mindy Brown | November 26, 2014

Sometime when someone's got a moment, would you mind reading my story, Callie Cameron - Country Chaos??

There's 13 chapters to is already (sorry) and there are spelling errors and my computer has a habit of changing the words :P

But I would really love some feedback.

And if someone would like me to read their story in return, please be warned i am not on often, but i will get to it as soon as i can.

AND (boy i sound annoying!) I'm not into Sci-Fi, mainly because i don't understand it. And i don't do Vampires, Warewolves, Aliens... ect ect. you get the point.

Thanks and Laterz!

Keely Kelly | November 27, 2014

How about looking at my story, Amber and Celebi's Adventure Through Time, and let me know what you guys think of it and how I'm doing with it?

And do you guys also mind sharing your thoughts on my Cube fan-fiction over on FanFiction.net, too? I'd like to know how I'm doing with that, too.

Blake and Melody's Escape: http://bit.ly/1ya6iQo

Amber Zephyr Galloway | November 30, 2014

Mindy, Keely and Amber I'd love to read your stories when I get the chance. As it is, I'm super busy so you may have to wait until January (plus I have a LOT of other things I have to read as well). My story is Blood Trail (I haven't updated lately because like I mentioned before I'm just so overwhelmed with life at the moment) but I'd appreciate comments on the 11 chapters I've written so far. Thanks!

The Tigress | December 8, 2014

Okay you guys I've read and commented on all of your stories. :) I've been revising some chapters of my story Blood Trail but even while I revise I'd still like comments on what I have so far. Thanks. :)

The Tigress | December 14, 2014

Oh, man. This doesn't make links live... I'd suggest typing the Bitly link of my Cube fan-fiction that I provided into the address bar. I made the link on my phone, so you might want to change it to the desktop mode, unless you are on you're phone, obviously.

Amber Zephyr Galloway | December 23, 2014

I have a new story! (am still working on the other one)

But this one is more of a romance :)

SO, here's the summary!

After Ashton's mother died when he was seven his whole world turned upside down. He never expected that a girl in Pink Converse Tennis shoes would turn his world around... and make it all the better

It Is set in older times, like before electricity and all that, so i know the shoes couldn't exist back then, but hey. I'm the writer, right?

And I will be willing to do a review exchange if the story meets my requirements.

I HATE sounding like a finicky whiner, but there's some things i DON"T get into. I hope you understand that.

Check my profile for Specifications!

Laterz!

Keely Kelly | January 2, 2015

If someone could take a look at "Drax & Mag: Unfamiliars", I'd be greatful to review back. Two chapters so far.

Description: 

Azadraxiel is a minor familiar demon that rather likes the earth. The Weirder who had summoned and bound her, one Bridget Cleary, was murdered by her husband when he discovered her practices, and instead of returning to Hell on the completion of Bridget's Contract, Azadraxiel, stole the body of her former master as her Ark (she'd been using a goat before) and lived on for hundreds of years as Bridget, on the Infernal Equivalent of an expired passport. She posed as progressively further removed descendants of the real Bridget the Burned, and practiced as a demonologist and Weirder, working under the nose of the Red Order--once known as the Inquisition. Using a loophole in the standard Contract of binding Familiars to their masters, she works to summon her sister, Magraxiel, to the mortal coil. 
ow, the aether is buzzing with news. 
News of something big about to happen. 
Something Biblical. 
Something using words like "Ark" and "Covenant". 
...And "Final".

Abbi Normal | January 3, 2015

I have my first story on here, and I was hoping for some feedback. Its about an immortal man going about his day in the modern world and remembering his various past lives.

Alex Truong | January 6, 2015

Hi there. I have a couple of stories that I would like some feedback on if anybody is willing. I will gladly return the favor. One is a short tradegy story I wrote to clear my writers block the other is a possible novella I would like to finish and publish one day so reviews and comments would be really appreciated. 

Gracie Rose | January 22, 2015

Hello!  I'd be happy to review any of your stories if you'd review mine.  It's called Thief and it's the only story I've posted so far on here.  Thanks :)

Molly Witten | January 24, 2015

Cool. If you could read Marked Book 1: A Darker Power I will be forever indebted to you :)

Gracie Rose | January 24, 2015

Okay. I have left a review on Thief, I hope it helps. If you could do the same for Marked I would really appreciate it. :)

Gracie Rose | January 25, 2015

Hi, me again. :) would anybody be interested in reading my new book? (Yes, I know. I haven't even started Marked yet but, if I don't write this now I never will and then I'll feel bad so, anyway) any help would be really great! It's called Created, Not Born BTW.

Gracie Rose | February 12, 2015

If someone could spare a few moments to read a new story I got on here called Where Chaos Reigns? It's historical fiction set during WW2 and has about 8 chapters so far.

Nicole Armas | February 17, 2015

How that a good amount of the Virtue Girls Story is now out.
Is it okay for it to get comments?

Benjamin Dine | May 5, 2015

Hello! I've been working on a story that I'm feeling pretty good about, and I was hoping that someone could look at it for me to tell me if there's anything I could improve. In exchange, I'll also leave a comment on that person's work(s?).

The story is called Tremors, and here's the (extended summary):

She is plagued by earthquakes. He is her constant savior. He is a misdialed number.

This is a record of their talks together.

Erunai and Kenji live in an apartment together. He is a well-known author, and she is a first-year geophysics major. During the day they exchange loving banter and occasionally philosophical whims, but at night, unbeknownst to her her, Erunai keeps him awake with panic attacks. Come morning she has no recollection of them, but he is worried for her and tries to find a cure to her condition. Then, after tragedy strikes, she accidentally calls him.

Be warned: I'm experimenting with a different writing style, so about 96%-97% will be just dialogue. I'm curious to see what people think of it, so please tell me if it becomes confusing or any other opinion you might have of it! If you find you dislike it, don't worry because I'm planning on writing another version of the story in the regular story format.

Here's the link: http://sparkatale.com/books/details/3631#.VZtA9JNViko

Thank you so much!

Aretice N. Treader | July 6, 2015

Hi! It's Millicent! I was wondering if someone could comment and review Spirit of the Forest or On the Wings of a Bird. I've only let a few of my friends read them and no one really likes them on Wattpad...

Millicent Dagworth | July 7, 2015

I would like someone to review Dave and Suki

Dave Borsho | July 8, 2015

Heya, guys!

If someone could give a look to Smoke and Mirrors and leave some constructive criticism, I'd be so happy. It's a fantasy story about dragons and smoldering pirates, so if you're into that, you should really give it a try.

Thanks a lot! Feel free to ask for comments in exhange, too!

diane sky | April 27, 2016

I would love to read it! Sounds like its up my alley! 

Aaron L. | April 28, 2016

I'll give five comments and an honest review if someone reads and gives my story, ("Because I love you") some feedback  I'm planning on entering it into the 2016 Wattyawards once they begin, so I genuinely want to do my very best on it. In order to know how to improve myself, I need as much honesty from fellow readers and writers as I can possibly gather. So, if anyone wants their stories read, commented on, and reviewed... feel free to tell me which ones you want.

I read, after all, just as much as I write.

Aaron L. | April 28, 2016

I was really hoping if somebody could help in commenting on my current project: Unusable. It's been a struggle to write over the past 9 months due to Writer's Block, but I'm getting there, & any sort of comments would be appreciated. 

I will, of course, give an equal amount of comments or reviews to the ones I get. 

Thanks in advance!

Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) | September 18, 2016

Hey Danny! I'll try to comment on your work when I have the time to do so. What types of reviews do you prefer? Specific, as in nit-picky, or general, as in how your work made me feel and the like?

Esca Skye | September 18, 2016

Hey thanks for getting back to me! I guess, considering this is something I genuinely want to publish, I'd really appreciate if you were as honest as possible. If there's something you find confusing, if you think a certain character wouldn't do such & such, or if you feel the world isn't built up properly, call me out on it. I can review your work as well, an eye for an eye, and all that!

Danny Power Hallihan (Dormant) | September 19, 2016