Across the Sea, a General story | SparkaTale

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Across the Sea

By: Luna's Child

Status: Completed

Summary:

My journey will be long, and at times difficult, but I will make it across the sea. One day.

Created: November 27, 2013 | Updated: November 27, 2013

Genre : General

Language : English

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      Man, with your writings, you can make readers feel guilty. You're not just using one, your using multiple senses, as I'm trying to apply (it) in my writings. But what I can't make is making the readers feel at least guilty. That's what at least give readers a realization.

      All of this style of your writings are the principles of show don't tell.

      -Jan

       

      April 25, 2016 | Hearm jan


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      I apologize for my extremely late reply. I appreciate very much your comment. I never knew that my writing, at least this work, evoked readers in such a way and stimulated so many senses.

      Thank you for your kind words!

      January 6, 2018 | Luna's Child