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Becky Black and the Magica

By: Becky Kirk

Status: In Progress

Summary:

   Becky Black was no ordinary girl. But her life went even more un-ordinary ever since she went to live with her Aunt and Uncle, the Zauron's. Studying the dark arts has always been a dangerous thing, but sometimes you need it. After the bus ride to Rhynda, Becky has no choice but to follow what her Aunt and Uncle believe in.

   Becky never knew she would actually get to talk to a highyl dangerous assassin and become close friends, with him; Sebastian Sionus, a tall, dark man who can change his form and who also takes an interest in the girl. Becky knew she was different from everyone else but to be ranked in "The Abnormal" rank is just outragous! The same as her wierd aunt and uncle. 

   There is only one reason because of her wierdness and that is becuase Rebecca Lillian Black is a Alchemist! She studies at the same school her uncle teachs at but is she safe? From everyone and everything? No.

   It is now down to the D.I.C.K.S to stop Fredadiltionalis, but most of all Becky must do it. Join the adventure undertaken by Becky and the D.I.C.K.S: Zacharius the Visionary; Macy the fair one; Sebastian, the Traniste; Bart, the Sociology Professor; Dave, the fearless one and so on … there are a lot of them, but they're the main.

   Becky Black is now in the spot light.    

Created: August 9, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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      Just finished the first chapter. Overall it was pretty good. One thing I would be careful of is how similar some things are to the first chapter of Harry Potter. Obviously your story is different, but if you were in the mindset of getting this published somewhere you would probably have to tweak it a bit so it wasn't as close as what it is. Other than that I think you have a nice start to the story. I'm interested to see what sort of person Rebecca will turn out to be.

      August 25, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      Oh, sorry i forgot. For those who don't know, Spero onmes means Hope to all in Latin.

      September 3, 2013 | Becky Kirk