Eyes in the Forest, a Science Fiction story | SparkaTale

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Eyes in the Forest

By: Nikki Shah

Status: Completed

Summary:

They think they are alone, but are they?

Created: September 24, 2013 | Updated: September 24, 2013

Genre : Science Fiction

Language : English

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        I found the use of a daily diary or news report very interesting as a way of telling the story.  I also felt that the suspense was well built as the conditions on Earth worsen with each of Luna Brown's entries.  There were many unanswered questions at the end of the chapter, which I think keeps the reader wanting to hear more about the mystery.  Overall, an excellent chapter, and I encourage you to develop the story further.      

        August 28, 2017 | Paula Grover