Equilibrar , a Fantasy story | SparkaTale

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Equilibrar

By: Emi V.

Status: In Progress

Summary:

She falls away from one world and is offered a white lily by a dying woman, awakening into another land. What is the Order of the Moon? Why does this chaotic world look to her to return balance?

Created: May 10, 2017 | Updated: May 20, 2017

Genre : Fantasy

Language : English

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      • Chapter: 1 Reply

        Beautiful, simple introduction which somehow manages to add a lot of information and lore into less than a thousand words. Glad to see you back into writing! Even the title is simple yet full of meaning. It feels like you've put so much thought into this. Keep up the good work!

        May 14, 2017 | Danny Power


      • Reply

        Thanks so much! It's good to be writing again, too. I'm sort of delving into all the fantasy tropes to see where that takes me, and if I can expand on them at all. Your comments always mean a lot. Hope to see more of your writing as well!

        May 15, 2017 | Emi V.