Halo: New Era, a Fan Fiction story | SparkaTale

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Halo: New Era

By: Thomas Boyle

Status: In Progress

Summary:

When the UNSC was created, there was one ship that disappeared as soon as it was built. The UNSC Bark malfunctioned and crash landed on an unknown island near Antarctica. 2164 was when it disappeared and now in 2601, only one person from the ship comes back. Airman Basic Thomas Locke was his name. What’ll happen when he gets to Sydney, Australia?

Created: February 23, 2017 | Updated: December 6, 2017

Genre : Fan Fiction

Language : English

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        This is a cute little story you've put together. I love Halo and I like the idea of what you've done. Is this a fan fic? Just curious. Also, you don't have to write your dialogue with who is speaking, you can just say what they've said then who said it just to mix it up a bit.

        For example, "Inside of the UNSC Bark in cyrosleep," Thomas answered. Sometimes, you don't even need to say the name because the reader can automatically assume that the next person in the conversation is one out of two. So, if one spoke the other one will speak. I hope you find this helpful and will continue to write your story!

        April 16, 2017 | Kalverya Nindo