Awakening, No Sequence, a Tragedy story | SparkaTale

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Awakening, No Sequence

By: Spyro Kev

Status: Completed

Summary:

With the events of No Sequence during the transitional period, April, a once homeless 17 year old female soul develops responsibility for her surroundings through her past threatening status, using her mental disorder against her so called "Retriever" taking place in the finale year of the Early 2000s, set in 2003.

Created: May 2, 2016 | Updated: September 19, 2016

Genre : Tragedy

Language : English

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      Its nice to see that No Sequence is noticed. Thank you. 

      Made some edits.

      July 27, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      I had to keep the facility short and simple or it would have taken away the feel of my novel I'm trying to hold on to. I hope everyone can understand the meaning behind this chapter.

      August 3, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      This isn't how I wanted the ending, but it made sense. Hope you enjoyed the story.

      August 10, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      Changed Phase's Right Hand Man's design to an influenced by Pharrell Williams. I realized his first design just wasn't right. I like how he now give off that deceiving approach.

      Won't make anymore heavy edits.

      September 19, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      I might update my edits of No Awakening and No Sequence. Their really progressed on FictionPress.

      No Awakening has a 1998 chapter now. Haha It made sense and I really improved Rapter's design.

      July 7, 2017 | Spyro Kev