No Awakening , a General story | SparkaTale

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No Awakening

By: Spyro Kev

Status: Completed

Summary:

No Awakening is a series featuring 2 partners of a male and female born with special power, Kev and Rin set in a Americanized real world setting taking place in the Early 2000s with a Late 90s Flash Back Chapter set after the starting point during the Middle 90s, themed around a portrayal of early millennium culture.

Created: May 31, 2015 | Updated: August 17, 2017

Genre : General

Language : English

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      Why does it say "Book cover not available? I have a cover I want to use, but I don't think I'm able to. 

      June 1, 2015 | Spyro Kev


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      Alright. I just finished editing my older Chapters in the best way I know how. I can honestly say I'm more proud of my work at this point. To all my viewers, thank you. If you wished to see my writing in a better light, re-read the Chapters you last read for removed rambling.

      September 19, 2015 | Spyro Kev


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      Moved to General.

      January 3, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      Update.

      Edited fixed dialogue in past Chapters, removed unnecessary reactions. Apple's Palace changed to modern day look of the 2000s , added details to credits.

      February 2, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      I'm better at writing the actual story than credits. Haha Hope everyone enjoyed. Made some last edits.

      April 4, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      The hour was worth it. With how the series beginning is constantly viewed, the unedited details needed to be respected. Hopefully I didn't make anymore unexceptional mistakes.

      In case anyone was wondering, the main character isn't me. Haha

      June 4, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      I had to change Ness's gender to female. It made too much sense. Hear me out. Ness as a male was too similar to Porky, out of place, basically looked the same as Kev who already is similar to Ness from Earthbound and his early dialogue was cheesy as if I tried to hard. The Lilith female I left under the name of Ness I admit can be influenced by Left Eye of TLC. I was able to capture her personality even through the bits of false Ness's quotes that turned out to be satisfying, I couldn't make work for false Ness. The Left Eye influence of Lilith Ness's design and personality is too brilliant to the story to pass up. She adds more debt, understand and emotion. Reread chapters 1, 4 and most of saga 3 if you want to understand. Also, the negative events that does fit for a male in saga 3 I edited as a male that mysteriously became affected by the false energy.

      Exclamation Alert!

      Don't read this paragraph if your just reading the series.

      By Chapter 27, you can see that Kev doesn't want to fight Ness, Lilith, already aware and in denial. You may have noticed in Chapter 1, Kev may would have liked to partner with his later who became an antagonist by accident, but didn't feel the same as Kev moved on. As what Kev would say, he isn't fighting Ness, just he's rather fighting the monster and negative energy aiding her. Hopefully I redeemed her properly.

      I won't make anymore heavy edits.

      September 17, 2016 | Spyro Kev


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      I really wish my book wouldn't appear on the front page ever time I update.

      Also, I meant Will Smith.

      February 2, 2017 | Spyro Kev


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      Finally go around to transferring the improved version of No Awakening from FictionPress. It was actually fun. Haha I wish I came to my senses sooner. It feels really embarrassing to have left the SparkaTale version unimproved for so long.

      Instead of having Genesis lose his mind into energy, I had him become the Alien's Heart, an eternal organ. It fits more with the millennium 2000. Bad enough he's already similar to Giygas from Earthbound. I also had his base designed after a computer system unit and shaped after computer body parts because repeat, its more millennium 2000.

      Will be transferring the improved version of Awakening, No Sequence sometime next week.

      August 6, 2017 | Spyro Kev