Status: In Progress
Summary:
Well, let's see. Where to start? The beginning? Of course. There's too many people who've gotten this story wrong. But how do I not do the same? Well, I'll try. My name is Mark, though you might know me as the Lark. I'm one of "The Four." And my story is just the beginning of a larger, more important story, one that has been hushed for too long.
Created: September 5, 2013 | Updated: September 7, 2013
Genre : Science Fiction
Language : English
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The writing in this chapter is very good but a pet peeve of mine is having all this beautiful writing only to use "2" and "10", etc, instead of writing out two, ten, twelve...If there is a reason to use the numeric symbol of the number, great, but when you're talking about time, age, etc, write the numbers out.September 8, 2013 | D.M. Gergen
