Lady of the Lake, a Mystery story | SparkaTale

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Lady of the Lake

By: Bizarre Muffinz

Status: Completed

Summary:

A young boy finds himself going deeper and deeper into darkness after one fateful night when he encounters the legendary "Lady of the Lake." One thing leads to another and before he knows it, his obsession consumes him entirely until he only lives to see her again. But is all really as it seems?

Created: May 6, 2015 | Updated: May 6, 2015

Genre : Mystery

Language : English

Reviews: 0 | Rating:

Comments: 2

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      • Chapter: 3 Reply

        This story is great. I love the written details. It just needs a bit of spacing, so I can clearly tell who's talking, but other than that, one of my favourite reads. Nice work.

        May 6, 2015 | Leaf Soto


      • Reply

        Thank you so much for the comment, it means a lot. And thanks for the tip. I love it when i get some constructive criticism that can help me out like that, so I'll try to fix the problem in future stories I write. Thanks again for the comment :)

        May 11, 2015 | Bizarre Muffinz