Battery Low, a Supernatural story | SparkaTale


Battery Low

By: Kitty Lewis

Status: Completed


When Alice crashed the car in the middle of the night, the first thing she did was call her dad for help. But her phone battery is running out...

Created: April 16, 2015 | Updated: July 28, 2015

Genre : Supernatural

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 1

Favorites: 2

Reads: 187

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Total Wordcount: 1086

Reviews (1)

  • Leaf Soto

    This is a great story. It's amazing for a short, single-chapter story with a surprising twist to it. This is really great and the supernatural it has to it, I truly enjoyed reading it.

    April 16, 2015 Flag

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    This is one hell of a good story! So vivid and detailed, at just a little over a thousand words no less, which can be difficult to do. I could feel the tension building, and empathize with both Alice and her father. The ending is just great, really can't elaborate on that without giving too much away to others. This is what short stories are all about.

    April 25, 2015 | Ryan Funk