Dear Me, a Romance story | SparkaTale

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Dear Me

By: Anthony Maria

Status: Completed

Summary:

Mason Gallo has fallen deeply in love with a mysterious woman named Keats Cameron, while on a trip to Niagara Falls, but is devastated when she disappears from his life, only sending cryptic letters, and making brief phone calls to him, which makes him feel like he is on the brink of insanity.

Created: August 30, 2013 | Updated: August 30, 2013

Genre : Romance

Language : English

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      Well the little bit I read was very good. It would have been better had you submitted this as separate chapters instead of such a mammoth of a post.

      August 30, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      yeah, i thought about it, but that would take to much time. This is a self published book already, if your interested in reading it, I can send u a copy or buy it on Amazon.com,

      August 30, 2013 | Anthony Maria


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      I would prefer to support a self-publishing author rather than demand a free copy. It wouldn't be a bad idea to post a link to the book somewhere in the description. If this site allows that. I know at some point they are talking about allowing authors to set prices for their stories on here, so that may be a conflict of interest. But again, if it's already published I would love to support your effort and then review it on Amazon when I'm done.

      August 30, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      thats really cool of you, i just did some re work on the cover so Its gonna be a few days before its back up on Amazon, but heres the link....http://www.amazon.com/Dear-Anthony-Henry-Joseph-Maria/dp/1301907413 Do you have some work I can read?

      August 31, 2013 | Anthony Maria


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      Most of what I've posted here is first drafts of things so they are rough. I do have something a little more finalized that I'm in the process of editing so maybe when that's done I'll give you a shout. Feel free to read any of the things I have up on this site and tear it apart if you're in the mood :) I'll keep my eyes out for your upload on amazon.

      August 31, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      hey can I ask are you male or female? I read a little bit you had on here, about an asian girl. The writing was good, like you have something for sure. Im not really into getting like a fine tooth comb out or anything cuase thats a bunch of crap to me. I think you got the talent, so keep writing.

      September 3, 2013 | Anthony Maria


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      I don't mind the fine tooth comb. No matter how much you edit it seems like you miss things or people reading from a different light pick out different things. One thing I've learned about having anything posted on a public forum is you can't have thin skin. And I'm female...as my silly little attempts at romance might suggest ;) Thank you for the compliment. As I've said before, you're very good too!

      September 3, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      And I just bought your novel. Looking forward to reading it!

      September 3, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      Awesome, thanks for the love. I mean the advice that I think is most important is to finish something. Take one of your ideas and see it through. good or bad it will change everything.

      September 3, 2013 | Anthony Maria