The Gods Among Us, a Action story | SparkaTale

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The Gods Among Us

By: QuickShot 1445

Status: In Progress

Summary:

After finding himself waking up in a pile of trash in a dark alley, a young teenage boy discovered he has power. Many, many powers in facts; the power to shoot ice from his hand, the power to teleport anywhere in the world, the power to move things with his mind. And yet, even with all he can do, there is one thing he can't do. He can't remember who he. However, as the years pass, he find a group of people who is willing to trust him and who is willing to help him remember who he really is. Or what he really is.

Created: February 14, 2015 | Updated: September 26, 2017

Genre : Action

Language : English

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      Its a good story. I hope you continue it. I'd really like to see the ending

      February 24, 2015 | Fatum 03


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      This is really good. No other comment out there, a side from the punctuation of dialogue tags, 'cause I ignore tenses, I can understand sentences without tenses.
       
      "What happen!?" Due to 'what' - it's understandable the he is confused, so, you don't need to write this '?' just "What happen!" - 'cause it's obvious.

      April 7, 2016 | Hearm jan