My Teddy, a Horror story | SparkaTale

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My Teddy

By: Zayo 69

Status: Completed

Summary:

Michelle Never asked for this. I guess when you go on a horror binge. you're bound to get a sleepless night, but that's not the case when it comes to this! Hold your breath and hope it doesn't find you next, for the demon in this story hold no bounds or blood...

Created: February 5, 2015 | Updated: February 5, 2015

Genre : Horror

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 7

Favorites: 1

Reads: 314


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Reviews (1)


  • Michael Mann

    This is a really good story, I felt genuine terror. It being short also helps with that. I hope you try some more horror stories, because this one was great.

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    February 11, 2015 Flag


Comments / Critiques


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    You know what? I had been searching every page in SaT a horror narrative that can inspire my next story. I'm easily affected right now since I drank two energy drink and 2 coffee, just so I can feel fear, so I could write my next chapter.

    Just arrange your paragraph, anyone will read this anyway. I'll comeback later and read this when I'm alone, in the dark.

    June 24, 2015 | Hearm jan


  • Chapter: 1 Reply

    Isn't Micheal a boy name? It's just another way to spell Michael, maybe were you going for Michelle?

    February 5, 2015 | Michael Mann


  • Reply

    Hahah Opps thanks for pointing that out I never really wrote that name a lot before I'll go back and fix it, But I hoped you liked it none the less. ^w^

    February 5, 2015 | Zayo 69


  • Reply

    It's all good, It's a short story so i have no problem reading it, But I'll actually read it when I'm not as busy as I am now, I was just checking it out real quick because the picture and title intrigued me.

    February 5, 2015 | Michael Mann


  • Reply

    Okay that's cool, I'm glad you're interested ^w^

    February 8, 2015 | Zayo 69


  • Chapter: 2 Reply

    Congratulations pal. You have officially scare me. Now I going to have troubles sleeping tonight. Thanks.

     

    February 5, 2015 | QuickShot 1445


  • Reply

    Sorry Scott I just really like making books like this, glad it gave you a good scare, sorry you can't sleep tonight heh. OwO'

    February 10, 2015 | Zayo 69