Familiar Secrets, a Mystery story | SparkaTale

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Familiar Secrets

By: Gadget Gurl

Status: Completed

Summary:

A little adventure on a pretty island becomes something entirely sinister.

Created: August 29, 2013 | Updated: September 3, 2013

Genre : Mystery

Language : English

Reviews: 1 | Rating:

Comments: 1

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  • D.M. Gergen

    A good story that is a quick and entertaining read. Gadget Gurl did a very nice job of giving her short story just enough detail to make her world vivid without bogging down the natural pace of the piece.

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    October 9, 2013 Flag


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    I read this before and am not sure why I didn't comment.  There were no gross errors in this piece and the story moved along well.  It was never dull and didn't feel too short, which I find is a common thing with single-chapter short stories on this site.  Well done.

    October 9, 2013 | D.M. Gergen