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To Xavier

By: Fatima Tiwad

Status: Completed


A letter to Xavier.

Created: November 18, 2014 | Updated: January 19, 2015

Genre : Thriller

Language : English

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Total Wordcount: 121

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      Richard!!! Your letter pains me, Richard! How dare you insinuate such rubbish? You tarnish my honour! Richard!!! I will not forget this insult! 


      November 18, 2014 | Emi V.

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      What exactly have I tarnished, Xavier? What is this honour you speak of? 

      Where was this honour as you carelessly struck your hand upon my face, Xavier?

      All I did was love, but that wasn't enough. 

      Nothing was ever enough. 

      I'm sorry I hurt you. 

      I'm sorry.


      November 18, 2014 | Fatima Tiwad

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      Do not speak your apologies to me, Richard! You play the wounded animal well, but we both know who you truly beneath that mask, Richard!! 

      I have always upheld my honour! Not only have you tarnished it, but now you question its existence all together?! Richard!!

      You will rue this day, RUE IT! You never truly loved me! You held me at arms length, strung me along like the dog I was made out to be! I am no longer your puppet, Richard! My strings have been cut! And now, I will cut you!

      Richard, oh sweet Richard. How you've wounded me so! My knife has been polished, and sharpened just for this occasion! 

      -Forever yours, Xavier

      November 18, 2014 | Emi V.

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      I do not fear you. 

      I've learned to defend myself, Xavier. 

      All those nights you were out, sleeping around the town with those goddamn cows, I have taken karate. 

      I've learned how to split woods, and cut boards with my hands, Xavier. 

      Come at me with your knife, I'll be ready. 

      I loved you not long ago, Xavier.

      But you have pushed me to great lengths. 

      YOU will rue the day. 

      --Gone, Richard

      November 18, 2014 | Fatima Tiwad

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      You don't.. you don't love me? No, how can this be? I have always held your heart, someone surely has taken it from me! Who was it, Richard? Who stole you from me? 

      I will not deny my adulterous ways, oh! How I've sinned, Richard! None of them could ever replace you, not a one! 

      You are my everything, Richard! Do not slip away from me! Those were but idle threats, made to lure you back into my embrace! Oh, Richard! Be mine once more! I shall carve my own heart out and give it to you, should you ask it of me! I will give you the world, Richard! The world!

      -Never stopped loving you, Xavier

      November 18, 2014 | Emi V.

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      You have bled me dry, Xavier. 

      I wish you a life full of pain and suffering.


      November 18, 2014 | Fatima Tiwad