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Hobbes City

By: Bethany Masters

Status: In Progress

Summary:

John Quinton, an injured 1st Lieutenant for the Union Army, is sent home to his family in the war-torn city of Lexington, Kentucky. Encountering violence and depravity, he, his cousin, and a few friends travel west to escape, meeting several different interesting and unique characters on his way.

Created: August 26, 2013 | Updated: September 2, 2013

Genre : Western

Language : English

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  • Amy Lynn

    I really enjoyed this! I like your dialogue and the story so far. However, sometimes I think you overdo the description. Other than that, this is great!

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    I have only read the first chapter but you've done a really nice job with the dialogue. There wasn't too much I can say in way of a critique with this chapter. It's written well and works as a nice introduction.

    August 27, 2013 | D.M. Gergen