Two Broken, a Romance story | SparkaTale

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Two Broken

By: Jonnah Z. Kennedy

Status: In Progress

Summary:

This is a series of random snippets--though they do still follow two lovers--set in the Victorian Era. If a story arises out of thse snippets, I will order them in a chronological way, even so, for the most part, these snippets are ordered from their first meeting, to the point up until the letters, but, the whole of it isn't chronological. In addition to this, the writing may be a little strange and hard to uderstand, all if it came out naturally while I listened to the melodies of Debussy, I hope that you enjoy these snippets.

Created: August 24, 2013 | Updated: September 4, 2013

Genre : Romance

Language : English

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      This was impressive. Powerful with a sad undertone to it. I really enjoyed it. It would be wonderful if you found a way to connect them a bit more into a sequence (like your summary says you might do), but even just as little bits and pieces I really enjoyed this.

      August 25, 2013 | D.M. Gergen


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      This is really good! I like the short chapters, I think it makes the snippets really effective ^^

      September 11, 2013 | Genevieve Middleton